*UncolaMan

I'm not at all satisfied with Part 13 of my Training Camp prelude, and will probably take it down and leave the details of the abduction ambiguous. I'd intended the girls to be fairly generic to give them flavor, but then what do I do when I bring them all together? I don't want to give any of them the spotlight over any others, but I also want a good story.

My next project will be a set of prospective endings for the series. Where could they wind up when it's all over?

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=Reinder Nov 3, 2009, 2:40:43 PM

Thank you for adding me to your watch.

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=guardian457 Oct 25, 2009, 5:40:59 PM

Thanks for watching.

~Montalve Oct 19, 2009, 10:44:46 AM

Thank you for faving Decisions of Faith, I hope to continue that story soon, it has the begining of a 2nd part, yet is incomplete...

my problem is that i have too many stories in my head and too little time to work on them... and sometimes no idea of howto begin or continue them

i hate that

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*yukitan Oct 15, 2009, 8:06:21 PM

Thank you for the criticism.

~TPollockJR Sep 21, 2009, 6:53:28 AM

Thanks for the Watch, and the Favs.

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~GreenCokeBottle Jul 13, 2009, 4:51:54 PM

thanks for the add

~Slash-November Jul 6, 2009, 8:01:26 AM

Thanks for your comment.

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*ken1171 Jun 28, 2009, 10:37:40 PM

Just came to say hello and thank you for +devWatching my 3D Animeness work! I appreciate the time you have spent browsing my gallery and hope you had fun!

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~ManFromAbora Feb 14, 2009, 8:55:05 PM

Thanks for the Watch!

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=nayou Feb 9, 2009, 3:22:45 PM

Thank you very much for your comments !

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