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About Me Premium Member Deviously Deviant UncolaManMale/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 2 Years
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It seems to be out of character for Kally to care about another woman seeing her topless, but you know her better than I do. Either Ka...


“You said I should undress for this. Did you mean taking these off, also?” Aiva seems to have a lot more control than K...

by *yukitan

Congratulations for pulling off such sexy pose without actually showing off any naughty bits. If she were a live model, this would mak...


Kally may have gotten a little citified, but she still manages to find herself in a lot of different situations. A time-out from the c...

Displeasure

Wed Oct 14, 2009, 9:20 PM
I'm not at all satisfied with Part 13 of my Training Camp prelude, and will probably take it down and leave the details of the abduction ambiguous. I'd intended the girls to be fairly generic to give them flavor, but then what do I do when I bring them all together? I don't want to give any of them the spotlight over any others, but I also want a good story.

My next project will be a set of prospective endings for the series. Where could they wind up when it's all over?

  • Listening to: Breakaway by Kelly Clarkson
  • Watching: SF vs MK 3 on Newgrounds
  • Eating: Pears, before they go bad
  • Drinking: Water.

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:iconreinder:
Thank you for adding me to your watch.

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:iconguardian457:
Thanks for watching.
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Thank you for faving Decisions of Faith, I hope to continue that story soon, it has the begining of a 2nd part, yet is incomplete...

my problem is that i have too many stories in my head and too little time to work on them... and sometimes no idea of howto begin or continue them :P

i hate that :P

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:iconyukitan:
Thank you for the criticism.
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Thanks for the Watch, and the Favs.

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:iconslash-november:
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Just came to say hello and thank you for +devWatching my 3D Animeness work! I appreciate the time you have spent browsing my gallery and hope you had fun! :hug:

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Thanks for the Watch!

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